RAPUNZEL

SHE LIVE HAPPILY WITH PRINCE AFTER GLOOMS.

RAPUNZEL

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

In childhood she was stolen by a witch at knell,

Caged in only window tower, she was Rapunzel.

 

Rapunzel with beautiful twinkled eyes and long golden hair,

Witch everyday climbed through the braid into tower.

 

Lonely girl in tower used to sing for time pass,

One day,. By passing through a Prince heard a melody awaz.

 

Prince fall in l.ove in the sweetness and jingle of voice,

He eagerly starts to search her in all eight directions.

 

As a place, at last, he found witch what she did-

Later, Prince climbed at tower as the way witch had said.

 

 

Wondered Rapunzel also felled in love with Prince

The world, made bloosoms in that little fence.

 

One day Rapunzel’s tongue slipped before witch mother,

Angry hag send her into dark wood after cut charming hair.

 

Next day evil doer attacked on prince for what he had find,

Nervy prince jumped on prairie grass and become blind.

 

Blind prince wandered for Rapunzel with his white horse,

Magically one day he heard an elegy in melody voice.

 

Ravishly Prince called out for Rapunzel in all direction,

She found him but sadly there was a question.

 

They talked surprisely and wept what had done

Magic a tear drop rejuvenated Prince’s eyes;

A flood of light flushed and Rapunzel turned doll wanton

Both at white steed walked for live indulgy.

Reviews

[raj24]

A BEAUTIFUL STORY THAT KEPT ME GLUED TO IT TILL THE LAST, ITS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND MOST IMPORTANTLY EVEN AFTER KNOWING THE END THERE WAS A DESIRE TO READ IT AGAIN N RE LIVE THE STORY ONE MORE TIME. NICE WORK BUDDY

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot brother.

[Lyndy]

This is a nice story of Rapunzel! i quite like the way it was made into a poem. :D

[Deepika]

One of my fave fairy tale being Rapunzel, it was like a recap of the movie to me! Beautifully written :)

[MomzillaNC]

This could use some editing for correct colloquial language use and for grammar, but all in all, a fairly thorough, if condensed retelling of the classic fairytale.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

OW!! I'm just shocked how you so maturely penned the RAPUNZEL story into a poem and it just kept me interested from top to the bottom,i enjoyed every line !,Thanks for a beautiful creation..I will be reading more of your pieces :)

[child of God]

Very good poem very good plot it flows together just well

[Vanesa Markovic]

Considering English is not your first language, this was very well written!!
-VM

[Matching Socks]

I loved your re-telling of this. Rapunzel Rapunzel.
I love this series of yours. Well done.

[Prabha Salimath]

Nice one SSAD because you have narrated it in a different dimension good one I liked reading it. There is love, vegenance and sad part beautiful.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Awesome poem, I loved it, nicely written.

Kaze~ :-)