WHO HAS TIME FOR LOVE!

WHO HAS TIME FOR LOVE!

                             -SADDAM HUSEN

 

I was a lad of whim-chime-funny nature,

No pain-gain-uneven, only play and adventure.

 

Every time-thing has a schedule to be clear,

Me too, that comes very swiftly at way of banter.

 

Her beauty encaged me and later worth enraged me,

Firstly I was amazed but soon it surged me.

 

I say �"“come dear! At a wonderful land for leave!”

Slewly she answered �"“WHO HAS ANY TIME FOR LOVE!”

Reviews

[BlackRose]

NICELY penned. Great knock out end to it.

[Saddam]

great thanks for your dear...

[BlackRose]

Your welcome! @{/:o)

[Tina Louise UK]

A slightly resentful piece? well penned hun :) x

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear. Your poetry is also awesome, I am quite fan of them.

[Tina Louise UK]

awww thank you x

[AYVID N]

A very good and solid punchline. An excellent writing from you.

[Saddam]

You like punch but think little about that boy.... Thanks dear for reading my one go poem.

[MsJewel]

Your creativity shines in this one my friend~
:) Julie

[Saddam]

This is one go poem so I was little bit scary... now I feel relief...Thanks for reading and reviewing my work..

[Brook]

I like this, you've wrote it well.
Everyone loves a bit of sarcasm!

Great job :)

[Saddam]

ha....man khus ho raha hai... my heart is dancing....thank you very much dear...

[Sami Khalil]

I feel the sarcasm in this poem. A good banter like you said...Bravo..............

[Saddam]

.....my heart is smiling. Thank you very much sir.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a little snarky my dear.Very different .People change like the winds :)

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear....This is one go poetry. So special for me.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)