WHO HAS TIME FOR LOVE!

WHO HAS TIME FOR LOVE!

                             -SADDAM HUSEN

 

I was a lad of whim-chime-funny nature,

No pain-gain-uneven, only play and adventure.

 

Every time-thing has a schedule to be clear,

Me too, that comes very swiftly at way of banter.

 

Her beauty encaged me and later worth enraged me,

Firstly I was amazed but soon it surged me.

 

I say �"“come dear! At a wonderful land for leave!”

Slewly she answered �"“WHO HAS ANY TIME FOR LOVE!”

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

Extremely whimsical; rolls from the tongue with a quick wit. I am a big fan of those with talent enough to create their own words in poetry when they work.

[audrie]

I have been raising two children - my son 19 and my daughter 13 - their father and I are divorced and I decided that I wouldn't have time for love until they were both grown - that is all fine and well, but I often wondered if I missed out on opportunity for true love -then I realized that mmy true loves are my children and I will always have time in the future to get involved in a relationship - only seven more years to wait yay!

Oh this is so mean and hard in the end, this rejection to love... you are a brilliant writer, my friend.

It always amazes me, when I read you. Full of twists...

- Elisa

[Penny]

It seems it is your own story you have depicted this poem. Anyway, the message is well delivered. Rejections are painful and even more so when you are given absolutely foolish reason to do so. Very nice poem.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Just a beautiful write, love can change people, but rejection can have a bad effect on someone too. Amazing write.

Kaze~ :-D

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. It is always a joy to hear you. Glad you like.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome my friend. It was my pleasure reading your writing. :-)

[Saddam]

Thank you very much my friend.

[Khushi]

love truly changes people especially rejection, poor guy. Lovely poem :)

[Saddam]

A very Thanks to you dear. I am so happy to read you dear, best day for me.

[Saddam]

You are really happy soul, you are hundred visit for me. Very special number for me.

[Khushi]

my name is khushi i gotta be a happy soul.. welcome..

[Saddam]

there you are.....

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very Interesting rhyme.

Not really sure why but I love
these lines. nice work. Blessings
Her beauty encaged me and later worth enraged me,

Firstly I was amazed but soon it surged me.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.

[Frieda P]

Oh this has some snap to it Saadd...'whim-chime-funny nature', wish I had thought of whim chime'd...well said! Enjoyed...

Did you mean 'slowly' or take poetic license with 'slay'?

[Saddam]

Thank you dear for reading and cirrecting my mistake. That is no slowly, That is SLEWLY it means- (jhatke se) suddenly, joltly, carelessly etc. You can googled.

[Frieda P]

Was my pleasure, that's a new one on me, I'll have to look that one up...

[Latifa]

Her beauty encaged me and later worth enraged me,

Firstly I was amazed but soon it surged me.
my favorite lines Ssadd, wonderfully written.

[Saddam]

Thank you... i am glad you like my work. I am notice YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL...

[Saddam]

Thank you... i am glad you like my work. I am notice YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL...

[Latifa]

thank you for the compliment