MY MISSING MOMENTS

MY MISSING MOMENTS

A Chapter by Saddam

MY MISSING MOMENTS

-SADDAM HUSEN

You are in me

I am finding a path

To reach you-sprout you.

 

An agitation is in me

It follows me at any worth

Alone it makes me weak to you.

 

A hitch is in me

Whenever hiccups came forth

I think �"I am reminding by you.

 

I am missing warm morning

Black tea at coral evening

Holding hand in silver moon.

 

My heart is beckoning you

I want to shelter in your heart

Want to talk for long time

Eye to eye, hand to hand, with you withal



© 2014 Saddam


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My heart is beckoning you
I want to shelter in your heart
Want to talk for long time
Eye to eye, hand to hand, with you withal

Woah, this is terribly romantic, beautiful and filled with countless imagery that forces into my brain!
You truly are a hopeless romantic and i hope that you'll write more and more about this (PLEASE)!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Sometimes these praise (hopeless romantic) Tease me. Is it tag for me? But sounds good. Thank you fr.. read more
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This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

Posted 10 Years Ago


Such a beautiful write, so moving. :-) I loved it.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


My heart is beckoning you
I want to shelter in your heart
Want to talk for long time
Eye to eye, hand to hand, with you withal

Woah, this is terribly romantic, beautiful and filled with countless imagery that forces into my brain!
You truly are a hopeless romantic and i hope that you'll write more and more about this (PLEASE)!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Sometimes these praise (hopeless romantic) Tease me. Is it tag for me? But sounds good. Thank you fr.. read more
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Beautifully touching hun :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear. Have a nice day.
Simply romantic and quite beautiful my friend !! enjoyed all your poems,thank you.:)
♥-maria

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear....Mujhe tumhari poetry bhi pasand hai. They are nice and impressive. Love you dear.
maria  ( rose)

10 Years Ago

your welcome! Love you too♥
Beautiful, it brought a tear to my eye.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Oh dear....God...
Thank you dear...My heart is wet by your tear. Glad you like that.
This is an amazingly beautiful poem. I love it. The whole love concept is shining bright and showing the importance of love in one's life. Keep it up. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

I am much pleased dear...Thank you so so much. I like your writing too, they are interesting.
Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

Thank you. (:
WOW this is a Romantic
Simply Beautifully written
I love it. this is going into to my
Library for reading. Blessings my friend



I am missing warm morning

Black tea at coral evening

Holding hand in silver moon.



My heart is beckoning you


I want to shelter in your heart

Want to talk for long time

Eye to eye, hand to hand, with you withal


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear for you kind words.

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