A FLOW OF LOVE

A FLOW OF LOVE

           -SADDAM HUSEN  

Lambent me, enliven my heart

For looking you, for caring you

Distance full moments heavily hurt

For showing you, for miening you.

 

For certain or uncertain purpose

Whenever you came towards me

Fighting, how I say, show my strata?

Peal of thunders badly wherret me.

 

Enliven I feel-heal your peal

A swelling undulation flow

Your clime, mayhem me

Your cure, allure me to be renew.

 

Thousands flowers blooms

Stars more blink and more shining

Many groups of birds sing

As you talk little bit love.

Reviews

[Honey-Bee]

Wonderful! Thousands flowers blooms Stars more blink and more shining Many groups of birds sing As you talk little bit love...Nice line!

[Sonam]

Very beautiful and sweet.... :)

[TheKratiMittal]

So touching!
amazing

[Shaquana Adams]

This is so sweet. This really is a wonderful flow of love. I enjoyed this one, as usual :)
-QuanaWana

[Penny]

If you sing that to a girl she would definitely lose her heart. Definitely flow of love. Very sweet. Keep writing like this

[maria ( rose)]

Your cure, allure me to be renew.you are an amazing writer. The flow of your words are astonishing without a doubt. Very Good !!
--maria♥

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

wow beautiful Lovely lines.


Thousands flowers blooms

Stars more blink and more shining

Many groups of birds sing

As you talk little bit love.

[Saddam]

thank you... thank you for your lovely feedback.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome my friend

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is a wonderful poem. It flows really well. Great job! :]

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear for your flowing words.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear for your flowing words.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lovely flow Ssaad excellentr lines :)

[Saddam]

Thank you very very much dear...love your art too.

[Brook]

The last stanza was written very well.
I love the poem, it flows wonderfully. You've done a great job!

[Saddam]

Deeply thanks to you my friend... Very glad to like you my work.