A FLOW OF LOVE

A FLOW OF LOVE

           -SADDAM HUSEN  

Lambent me, enliven my heart

For looking you, for caring you

Distance full moments heavily hurt

For showing you, for miening you.

 

For certain or uncertain purpose

Whenever you came towards me

Fighting, how I say, show my strata?

Peal of thunders badly wherret me.

 

Enliven I feel-heal your peal

A swelling undulation flow

Your clime, mayhem me

Your cure, allure me to be renew.

 

Thousands flowers blooms

Stars more blink and more shining

Many groups of birds sing

As you talk little bit love.

Reviews

[Saddam]

Thousands flowers blooms

Stars more blink and more shining

Many groups of birds sing

As you talk little bit love.

This part really speaks to your reader,... very nicely done.. indeed

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

you are very welcome

[Kasey Miriam]

Beautifully penned. Great job I enjoyed reading this

[audrie]

For certain or uncertain purpose

Whenever you came towards me

Fighting, how I say, show my strata?

Peal of thunders badly wherret me.

This is gentle and elegant - beautiful

[Derek Smith]

I really like this one
Good job

[s y e]

Loved the imagery here, this is very well written SSADD!

[Utkarsh Singh]

gud one ssadd ....keep sending me more

[Ruth]

This is so lovely...I love the imagery woven...a pleasure to absorb hon x

[lissalovesyou]

Oh, I LOVE that last stanza.
Amazing!
lissalovesyou:)

[Itumeleng Molokomme]

it just put a smile on my face... beautiful

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Outstanding write, I loved every bit of this poem.

Kaze~ :-) :-D