FOR MOON PERAMB

FOR MOON PERAMB

-SADDAM HUSEN

Gaiety

No society

Only my beauty.

 

Quiver

Flowing water

Edge of river

With you at weir.

 

Round

And round

With your jocund.

 

Blither

Strange eager

Flowery fragrant shower

Till the evening star.

 

Talk

Which knock

To end heart.

 

Ear ball

 Mine enthrall

Your sweet call

As easy snow fall.

 

Distress

Little silence

Even small distance.

 

Tramp

Hand inhand

For moon peramb

Away from this land.

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing poem, it flows so beautifully, nicely written.

Kaze~ :-)

[BlackRose]

Lovely piece that flows well. Seems to be a poem about some kind of love. Nicely penned err typed.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[Marie]

This has a strange beauty. Each line seems to ring like a little bell.

[Saddam]

oh wow..... Thank you so much dear.

[MsJewel]

So lovely and so few words. Brilliant my friend.

:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thank you sooo much dear. Every word I read at much persue. Glad you like it.

[Sami Khalil]

Distress

Little silence

Even small distance.



Tramp

Hand inhand

For moon peramb

[Saddam]

Thank you Sir, you reminding me my moments.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).................

[A. Amos]

I really like the flow and your poetry is simply spectacular!

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! Nice craft, Ssadd. I like your shape poetry.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[NeiL ArandA]

A women of few words. Sometimes the fewest words speaks the most volume .

[Saddam]

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

[Saddam]

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. But it is not a women, its me.

[Shaquana Adams]

Ear ball

Mine enthrall

Your sweet call

As easy snow fall.

Vivid word play. Very nicely penned.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear. It is long time since hear you, but it is great honour. Thanks a lot.

[zephyr]

A tremendous play with words. Fantastic.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.