ONE MOMENT

ONE MOMENT

-SADDAM HUSEN

Just one moment was that

But it is in my deep heart and soul

The fragment of her

Her tight warm wish

And whispered which she made in my ear

That all blowing and flowing

In my nerve, feel and seem

You are coming from east

I am looking for you, my best.  

Reviews

[Penny]

Nice write. I liked it...

[Saddam]

Thank you friend.

[Latifa]

nicely penned poetry Ssadd, I like the wording.

[Saddam]

Great thanks for you dear.

[Radhika]

'Just one moment was that'
So true..Sometimes such things happen in just one moment that it becomes deep rooted in our mind and heart forever.
Very sweet and fairy like poem !

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. Glad you like it and give your precious words.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

"in my nerve, feel and seem"....good usage of words here..
Nice write Ssad...

[Saddam]

Glad you like it my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

I think you are dreaming or having nightmares about Saddam. Not sure...lol
For this write It is blowing and flowing...:)................

[Saddam]

i can say....both....Nightmares and dreaming too. thank you very much sir...

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:)..................