WAITING FOR MY SWEET WOE

Waiting for my sweet woe

 

Now a day my heart is flinching

It wriggling for being in love

A strong feeling arise through instinctive

When I look at my silent mobile

No call, no even any love message

I badly miss sweet words and a face.

 

Though I like my friends much, attached

But for this, my faith pother move

The talk about her, I can’t say even few

Conversation ends at my fake smile

Their arrow words kill my patience

Sighed, moaned and feels anguish.

 

Away- alone, I used to think a matched

Everywhere look with keen eyes for dove

But still waiting for my sweet woe

No trick, ‘cause my core is fragile

My heart is summon for a true one

Who love me-I love her

Who talk- eyes to eyes and

Live indulgently hand to hand

We shall sing a song queer

Between us, there will be none.

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I relate strongly to the emotions you've laid out here, and the intensity behind your imagery. I love the idea of conversations ending with a fake smile, I know just where you're coming from there. Too many great lines for me to quote here...awesome work.

[Saddam]

I am greatful to you my friend. Glad you like it. Thank you sooo much. Dhanyawad.

[Sami Khalil]

Waiting can be worth it...Keep it up...Bravo...............

[Saddam]

thank you very very much sir....

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............

[Tina Louise UK]

May you find that love again soon, beautiful :) x

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear....it is not about finding again, it for first one.. . thanks a lot dear...

[BlackRose]

A great but sad ditty about not having the one we love around or them not ever coming back to greet us in our mornings and tucking us in holding us tight as we sleep, vise versa.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear....

[BlackRose]

Your muchly welcome.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh the ache of missing the one we love.I hear you Ssadd :)

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend....

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)