WAITING FOR MY SWEET WOE

Waiting for my sweet woe

 

Now a day my heart is flinching

It wriggling for being in love

A strong feeling arise through instinctive

When I look at my silent mobile

No call, no even any love message

I badly miss sweet words and a face.

 

Though I like my friends much, attached

But for this, my faith pother move

The talk about her, I can’t say even few

Conversation ends at my fake smile

Their arrow words kill my patience

Sighed, moaned and feels anguish.

 

Away- alone, I used to think a matched

Everywhere look with keen eyes for dove

But still waiting for my sweet woe

No trick, ‘cause my core is fragile

My heart is summon for a true one

Who love me-I love her

Who talk- eyes to eyes and

Live indulgently hand to hand

We shall sing a song queer

Between us, there will be none.

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I relate strongly to the emotions you've laid out here, and the intensity behind your imagery. I love the idea of conversations ending with a fake smile, I know just where you're coming from there. Too many great lines for me to quote here...awesome work.

[Saddam]

I am greatful to you my friend. Glad you like it. Thank you sooo much. Dhanyawad.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

very sweet. blessings Kindred poet



When I look at my silent mobile

No call, no even any love message

I badly miss sweet words and a face.

[Saddam]

Too kind of you dear. Thank you so much

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. blessings kindred poet

[Blue]

Reminds me greatly of someone I miss.

[Saddam]

thank you soooo much dear beloved poet....
I am very happy to hear you.

[costa siwale]

a lovely read, the intensity of impatience. well written

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend....

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Aren't we all waiting for that escape, great read, good job.

[Saddam]

hahaha....thanks a lot dear friend....

[Penny]

Ha. I'm waiting too. Nice write.

[Saddam]

then we are the same....thank you very much...

[Saddam]

then we are the same....thank you very much...

[MsJewel]

I could feel the longing in this one my friend. Good work!

:) Julie

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear. .

[star73]

nice poem good job creative

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear.

[Vaishali Roopesh]

Lovely poem, Ssadd. Great job.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear.

[AYVID N]

Of course...as our dear poet friend says...it's worth the wait truly. Great poem Ssadd

[Saddam]

thank you dear for this lovely compliment...