MY SPECIAL WOMAN

MY SPECIAL WOMAN

A Poem by Saddam

At a path through flowery xystum

Purposelessly hovered in gaiety maximum

Perfuming environment, with dear full hum

Even little silent disquieting.

 

Soft breeze on face splendor

Blinking and twinkled eyes like solitaire

Enchanted coral lip of knop quiver

Sweet tones make me elevating.

 

Took her by the hand and whisper

Exquisite spring aura we ignore

Just me and my special woman, however

Time was slowly rushing.

 

Alone, lost in one-another, till the day end

Though spring season still to come on land.

© 2014 Saddam


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"Alone, lost in one-another, till the day end"

Beautiful and romantic...Bravo, sir...:)............

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much sir....I'm too glad that I can't tell you sir... such a big bravo is....hurrah.... read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Good. You are welcome...:)...................
Beautiful my friend...enjoyed :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saddam

10 Years Ago

love your compliments....thank you very much....
You are a true romantic my friend.Your words say you are .

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saddam

10 Years Ago

thank you very much dear. You words push me ahead to do. Thank you very much.
nicely done i love it need to enjoy each others time together. is what i gathered from this poem that time doesn't last forever.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

oh....I'm glad that you like it dear...thank you very much...
This was a lovely read. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saddam

10 Years Ago

thank you very much for your sweet compliments dear friend.

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RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India



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