MY SPECIAL WOMAN

At a path through flowery xystum

Purposelessly hovered in gaiety maximum

Perfuming environment, with dear full hum

Even little silent disquieting.

 

Soft breeze on face splendor

Blinking and twinkled eyes like solitaire

Enchanted coral lip of knop quiver

Sweet tones make me elevating.

 

Took her by the hand and whisper

Exquisite spring aura we ignore

Just me and my special woman, however

Time was slowly rushing.

 

Alone, lost in one-another, till the day end

Though spring season still to come on land.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Simply Lovely so much Romance.


Very well pinned.

I loved these stanza's lines.

Soft breeze on face splendor

Blinking and twinkled eyes like solitaire

Enchanted coral lip of knop quiver

Sweet tones make me elevating.


Thank you for sharing. Blessings. Kindred poet

[Penny]

Romance, potrayed as we want to experience it. Your poem is a delight to our senses, our imagination. Very nicely written.

[Blue]

"Alone, lost in one-another"

Lovely words that keep resonating in my head.

[Saddam]

most happiest moment when i read you. Thnk you very much dear.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A breaking piece that allows for the reader to dream, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

thanks a lot dear sir...I'm glad..

[SAYED THANGAL]

passionate, highly deep, but ends the poem with an optimistic mood, well done

[Saddam]

thank you so much sir...i am glad that you like it...

[David Scott]

You give a nautical theme here. I like the use of the unique vocabulary.
I could almost imagine this bring written for a boat... :)
Beautifully done.

[Saddam]

thanks for reading and for four wonderful compliment sir... Thank you very much.

[Rehan Roy]

For the lover, his paramour looks seraphic. Very romantic composition.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend.... Glad you like.

[MsJewel]

You have created some lovely images in this beautiful poem. One of my favorites by you!

:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear..... Your every words are special....

[Frieda P]

An enchanting read, and I learned a new word in the interim 'xystum'. Not sure what you mean by 'knop quiver' but it sounds good to me.

[Saddam]

xystum means a flowery way....and knop quiver means a bud, little bud. Thank you very much dear...

[Saddam]

xystum means a flowery way....and knop quiver means a bud, little bud. Thank you very much dear...

[Frieda P]

Google gave me xystum, but only definition I got for knop was knob, thanks for clearing that up, enjoyed nonetheless!

[Saddam]

hope you enjoy...thank you very much...

[Frieda P]

I did, star sent me your way, glad she did.....

[Saddam]

thanks a lot dear...

[Saddam]

thanks a lot dear...

[AYVID N]

Truly lovely images created here Ssadd. She brings spring with her.

[Saddam]

thank you dear....