LETTERS OF LOVE

After long time, one day

I opened my aged layered box

Too loaded with lots of may

Emotions, feelings, attachment, max.

 

My favorite plane with key

My insensate mild brown cat

Colorful monkey with one hand free

Attractive, old fashioned two striped hat.

 

At one corner, a bundle of paper appeared

The bundle tore my good imagination

With a dark green envelop, it covered-

My unfinished love story’s fraction.

 

I opened it in my lap with shivering hand

Words at pink paper with multicolored ink

Mild-wild write at never failed moment

The songs letting my heart sink.

 

  These papers in thrilled me back

White blaze papers burnt me inside

The letters of love revert my rack

I closed that memory box at a sight.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Nicely Pinned here.


Loved these stanza's lines.

These papers in thrilled me back

White blaze papers burnt me inside

The letters of love revert my rack

I closed that memory box at a sight.


thank you for sharing. blessings. kindred poet

[C. Rose]

I was confused by several phrases
after long time: after a long time
lots of may?
max?
at one corner: in one corner
Words at pink paper: words on pink paper
mild-wild?
in thrilled?
revert my rack?
at a sight: on sight

Liked:
"the bundle tore my good imagination"
The overall image/premise
Stable punctuation.

[costa siwale]

Wonderfully written poem..I like it

[Blue]

Whoa. You're getting better and better and better... Keep up the good work!

[Saddam]

thank you dear poet...love your words...as well you.

[stars are far]

that is so well done..
old memories can hurt sometimes..but what is left from them as a phsical stuff may hurt us more..
keep it up

[Saddam]

well...my echo is the same....Thank you dear....

[stars are far]

yeah.. my pleasure dear :)

[Saddam]

thanks dear...

[Penny]

Nyc poem. If one had memories that could be preserved, would have many such scribblings which would make us laugh or cry. Reminds me of my old school notebooks or the diary I used to write my first poems in. Well done

[Saddam]

I am much pleased that you found it relative....my dear friend....

[Penny]

I can relate to it but it more like a utopia to me. My pleasure.

[star73]

i love it to memory box and love letters opened with sadness or joy:) i preferably with joy

[Saddam]

Thank you very much...

[Tina Louise UK]

Memory boxes are a wonderful thing to have, they can bring sorrow and joy when opened ...enjoyed :) x

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

What a thought provoking poem Ssaad .

[Saddam]

Thanks dear...

[Vidya Bacchus]

you are welcome :)

[Vaishali Roopesh]

Such a heartfelt poem. I like how you pull the reader to your words. Very nice.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend for your compliment.