SPECIAL LADY

SPECIAL LADY

 

My whole world is you
My letter and its words
My scars and its pain
My heart and its beat.

Every wind has a special mean
It is bringing your sweet spray
Trills of your tingling earrings
And exalting sound of bangles.

The song of birds perplexed
Blooming lilies of near pond brooding me
It seem yours white dress bud
These all far fairer aura stirred me.

I made my special lady's image in air
And talked about my state
Asking about her amatory
We whispered for long hours.

 

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Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Romantic lovely.


Lovely Stanza's lines here.

My whole world is you
My letter and its words
My scars and its pain
My heart and its beat.

Thank you for sharing. blessings. kindred poet

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a soft zephyr of springtime's blooming, a tender read.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

You created a wonderful aura!!! truely beautiful lines...
Good work Ssad

[Saddam]

thank you Sandip Bhai... Mujhe khusi hai ki aap ko ye pasand aya.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

U are welcome bro.. Likhthe hi raho..its a pleasure to read them!!

[Saddam]

thank you again... with lots of respect.

[Blue]

"My whole world is you
My letter and its words
My scars and its pain
My heart and its beat."

We often think of our beloved as our everything. You had me at your first stanza, Ssadd.

[Saddam]

thanks a lot dear friend...I'm much pleased...

[star73]

very nice poem. great writing

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend...

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is a really lovely poem. Great job!

[Saddam]

thank for your lovely comment...

[Vidya Bacchus]

A most lovely poem my dear Ssadd .Keep on writing you are great at it :)

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend....i'll be

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautiful romantic read Ssadd :) x

[Saddam]

thank you dear...

[SAYED THANGAL]

the last stanza is so appealing and a self realization, good lines

[Saddam]

thank you dear sir...

[Penny]

Again, romantic and mystical. I just loved the first stanza. Great write. Keep it up.

[Saddam]

great thanks for you dear friend....

[Penny]

My pleasure.