A SHADOW

Something is close in my heart

What is it? I don’t know

Something is teasing in my soul

What? It is mocking on me.

 

Sometimes I feel much happiness

Other hand I began to think

Why I disquiet my soreness

A shadow, which always blink

On my head and aching my essence

This gore shivering me at full rank.

 

A shadow, your shadow of past

At my close eyes, in my dream

You, in my think, write and cast

You are blowing in my nerve and steam.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"A shadow, your shadow of past

At my close eyes, in my dream

You, in my think, write and cast

You are blowing in my nerve and steam."

Simply beautiful...:)...................

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Himanshu shekhar]

Nice composition with attractive line keep writing ..........
Last stanza is nice.just write Ssadd

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend ...Much is khusi ki jarurat hai. dhanyawad.

[Himanshu shekhar]

Its my pleasure:-)aap ko tahe dil se aabhar.

[Penny]

Sometimes we leave some people so far behind in our lives, its hard for us to even remember how we felt for them. Well written..

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend....true...

[Penny]

Welcome. And its time you forget people, relationships with whom were too complex or painful.

[SAYED THANGAL]

the beginning ultra provocative, all the meanings are very well expressed here

[Saddam]

thank you sir for your encouragement words.

[Tina Louise UK]

Bitter sweet memories of the past, enjoyed Ssadd :) x

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your poems are always so great Ssadd.I always enjoy them :)

[Saddam]

thank for your kind words dear.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Much welcome you are :)

[Rehan Roy]

'You are blowing in my nerve....' Utter submission of this physical body, identical with name and form is called true love.

[Saddam]

thanks brother....meri khusi kahe na ja rahi hai.. nan bhar gaya hai...thanks to all.

[Rehan Roy]

These lines are mine composition in my mothertongue.....'Dariya ki sitam hai, saagar me ant hona; rahte vahi diwaane, jise aata ho khud ko khona; mere man ye jaan le tu, tera yaar koi nahi hai; behna to mauj he teri, phir kyun chute hue ko pakarna'.........

[Ahena MK]

A shadow, your shadow of past

At my close eyes, in my dream

really good !!!
really really good !!
really really really good !!

[Saddam]

i am jumping on my bed to read you all dear friends....glad you like my art...

[Sami Khalil]

Keep up the good work sir...:)...............

[Saddam]

if all friend bless me i'll keep on sir....dua sabhi ka chahiye. thank you sir.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[InconsequentialTragedy]

I really enjoyed this keep it up.

[Saddam]

i'm glad sir that you enjoying my poetry.... thank you very much.