MY PRINCE

MY PRINCE

Don’t be mawkish with me

I’ll sing for you a lilt

I limn you on my canvas

Though my lyric is limerick

Though my imagination is thick.

 

Don’t be scold for ambiguity

The fell bridge I’ll rebuilt

The knob also I will surpass

These macabre, can’t make me weak

Though you are stand for nick.

 

Feel my beat of essence

Always perceive your presence

Before me, with me, my prince

Let finish this awfully shuns.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Love the rhyme beautiful.


loved the last Stanza's lines.

Feel my beat of essence

Always perceive your presence

Before me, with me, my prince

Let finish this awfully shuns.



Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. Blessings. kindred poet

[star73]

i like it a lot:) it's very good

[Saddam]

thanks a lot dear....

[Rose of Gondor]

I love the rhythm of this piece. It flows really well and I love the way the words fit perfectly in your verses. A truly wonderful poem indeed.

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend...

[Rehan Roy]

'I'll sing for you a lilt....Feel my beat of essence .....Before me, with me, my prince' You said it with an excellent flair.

[Saddam]

thank you dear for your words...

[Ahena MK]

Feel my beat of essence

Always perceive your presence

good !! very good well penned

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend....

[Sami Khalil]

You write beautifully. Women should not shun you but embrace you...:).............

[Saddam]

big thanks for you sir...mera dil ga raha hai.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........................

[Penny]

You have written with a girl's perspective which makes it special. It captures that feeling of gratitude one has while in love. Beautifully expressed sweet piece. Well done.

[Saddam]

thanks dear friend...big thanks dear...

[Penny]

Ur aleays welcomed. My pleasure totally.

[Vidya Bacchus]

A most wonderfully written piece my friend.Well enjoyed :)

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend...mujhe badi khusi mahsoos ho rahi hai...i feel muvh pleased.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Ssadd :)