STILL I THOUGHT

What kind of beauty she was?

Still I thought.

What kind of heart she has?

Still I thought.

 

Beauty, so soft and so light

So fair and so sweet;

Heart, so kind and so hard

So dear and so quite.

 

Have she ever any kind of cross

Still I thought.

 

One day she turned to me and say

“Why are you so sad?

The world is nothing, feel happy and gay

Misery or sorrow is very bad.”

 

What happened that day and on?

Still I thought.

 

 

 

 

Follow days, I repeat her every act

“I am copying you”

Repeatedly one cloudy morning I react

“I am loving you.”

 

For propose, was that good cause?

Still I thought.

 

She turned round with tearful eyes

“This is not possible

There is one, who makes me nice

I am not your able.”

 

Why the world, that day, not become dark?

Still I thought.

Since that day, I am burning in hell

My heart is beating in pain

When I heard about her or tell

I used to cry, then.

 

Can she change her decision rock?

Still I thought.

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Reviews

[stars are far]

:'( *tears* you made me cry :((
that was very good.. hope she realizes that you are the best ..well done

[Saddam]

ah...that touch my heart dear....Thank you for realising my pain...

[stars are far]

same pain..almost..hope you will be healed

[Saddam]

I'm on the way of rehabilation by my poems....thank you very much.

[costa siwale]

A good piece, properly done

[Saddam]

Thank you very much...

[Blue]

Your structured this elegantly, Ssadd. And so far, the best poem I've read from you. Keep writing.

[Saddam]

I'm greatful of you dear...thank you very much...

[Penny]

Your best poem yet. Could feel the love, feel the pain. Thnx for sharing

[Saddam]

what i can say dear...i am happy thank you dear friend.

[Penny]

And dats make me smile too. My pleasure

[paul sal.....]

You never know unless you try...........beautiful imagery and expression of emotion, I guess it is the same all over the world............I would rather see headlines about this.........

[Saddam]

thank you dear....

[star73]

your poems are very good and very creative

[Saddam]

Thank you.... Glad you like it..

[Sami Khalil]

You are a hopeless romantic...And a rising poet...:).............

[Saddam]

Your words sir make my heart smile...thank you very much.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)...................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Brilliant! Nice presentation of a sad love story...or shall I say, one-sided love story?
Still I Thought...
Great!

[Saddam]

Great....thank you very much dear friend.

[Khushi]

Amazing, such a short poem with the story of a thick novel. It conveys so much. What a creation. Well done :)

[Saddam]

thank you dear....your appearence is also amaging dear..

[Khushi]

welcome. My exams are round the corner so I will not be very active. But I will read ur poems afterwords :)

[Saddam]

a warm thank you dear...and best of luck...score more.

[Khushi]

thanks.. i need luck..

[Saddam]

my good wises is with you