STILL I THOUGHT

What kind of beauty she was?

Still I thought.

What kind of heart she has?

Still I thought.

 

Beauty, so soft and so light

So fair and so sweet;

Heart, so kind and so hard

So dear and so quite.

 

Have she ever any kind of cross

Still I thought.

 

One day she turned to me and say

“Why are you so sad?

The world is nothing, feel happy and gay

Misery or sorrow is very bad.”

 

What happened that day and on?

Still I thought.

 

 

 

 

Follow days, I repeat her every act

“I am copying you”

Repeatedly one cloudy morning I react

“I am loving you.”

 

For propose, was that good cause?

Still I thought.

 

She turned round with tearful eyes

“This is not possible

There is one, who makes me nice

I am not your able.”

 

Why the world, that day, not become dark?

Still I thought.

Since that day, I am burning in hell

My heart is beating in pain

When I heard about her or tell

I used to cry, then.

 

Can she change her decision rock?

Still I thought.

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Reviews

[Ruth]

Very emotive love...powerfully articulated and felt x

[Kamari's]

Full of raw emotoin and touching bravo.

[Life Pal]

Grammar problem but poem is nice

[Nena]

Do work on your grammar. Either than that, it was a sad poem. But nice!

[TheKratiMittal]

Without going much deep,a very sensitive and over-the-top feelings poem.
Liked the way you presented it!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Very emotional poem, it's so beautifully written. Nicely written my friend. I loved reading it.

Kaze~ :-)

[Matching Socks]

Oooh, I think I like this one too!
:)

Nice job

[Namrata]

a very touching poem. Honest and crude, might I add?

[AprilRN1210]

I can feel the pain dripping from each carefully placed thought. nice job.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear......

[AprilRN1210]

you're welcome

[Utkarsh Singh]

from where u get such amazing ideas ?
Still I thought.

haha
nice poem buddy

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend....

[Utkarsh Singh]

welcome buddy