POEM ON CANVAS FOR YOU

Don't be mawkish with me

I'll sing for you a lilt

I limn you on my canvas

Though my lyric is limerick

Though my imagination is thick.

Author's Note

this is little piece of my new poem, please tell me your thought that it is able to be continue. thanks..

Reviews

[Blue]

Sorry but I'm a bit dull for something sensible to say. I don't know how to interpret this in an intelligent level. Haha. Pardon...

[Saddam]

everything which you have thought are welcomed dear. no matter it is good or not....thank you very much.

[star73]

Its unique and quit different alot of different meanings.

[Saddam]

thank you dear for your compliment.

[Frieda P]

Well, I've never been 'limn'd' before but it sounds good. Like the juxtaposition of limn and limerick, it works...

[Saddam]

thank you friend...i am glad to hear you.

[Rehan Roy]

These lines are very meaningful, dear poet.

[Saddam]

thanks bro for your stop. i'm glad.

[Vaishali Roopesh]

'Tis a smart poem. Like it.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear.

[Penny]

Nyc. Very nyc. It looks personal and that is not seen in many poems. This may become one of the best informal poetry if you elaborete. Well done.

[Saddam]

I am trying to do my friend. Thank you very much for positive comments.

[Penny]

Its not a favour from my side. Anything good is always appreciated. :-)

[Saddam]

a gentle thinking you have dear friend... thanks.

[Sami Khalil]

This was different from your other ones and good...Thank you for sharing sir...:)..............................

[Saddam]

I am trying to heal my pain with good, someone have tell me. so I'm trying. thank you for compliment sir.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).......................

[Ahena MK]

Don't be mawkish with me
I'll sing for you a lilt
I limn you on my canvas
Though my lyric is limerick
Though my imagination is thick.

really good ..

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend for you stop.