DISTANCE WILL BE OVER

from my other writerscafe id HEART OF LOVE which is ONLY for SONNETS of love and its passion.

DISTANCE WILL BE OVER

@Saddam husen^®

 

 

I was just blowing with current,
My heart is beating with own force 
No thirst, not hunger; only your precedent

(of love) 
I want to meet you, all my source. 

The day, you fold me in your arms;
Still I can feel your heat;
That special day and your feelings warms 
And that very first kiss on lip. 

All your support in weal and woe 
I want then relive them all;
Your good morning wish in joy 
Your accompany till the day fall. 

Soon the distance will be over 
I and you will accomplish for ever.

 

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Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

another wonderful work from you my dear friend... a very good read

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Chirag Kumar]

I like the style in which you have written this piece. Different from the rest but penned down brilliantly. Nice work Saddam :D

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A compelling and dramatic piece that reads well, good job.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Blue]

This reminds me of my beloved on the far side of the world. Now, I'm missing him more...

Anyway, lovely last two lines.

[Saddam]

oh..great glad that you found it relative.

[Penny]

This poem is good and unlike your other works it has postivity to it. What else.. you have inspired me to write something romantic :-P. Very well done.

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend for your positive effective compliment.

[Penny]

You are always very welcome.

[Penny]

You are always very welcome.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"Soon the distance will be over
I and you will accomplish for ever."
To some, distance doesn't matter...
Nice poem.

[Saddam]

thank you dear.

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautiful heartfelt piece...enjoyed :) x

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend.

[MsJewel]

A lovely message my friend. Your poem is beautiful

:) julie

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Latifa]

a heart felt piece Ssadd I like it a lot

[Saddam]

thank you very much.

[Anand Sehgal]

connect to the source and live in good spirit.
That's the way.
very noble words !
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[Saddam]

thank you dear friend...very nice to hear you.