DISTANCE WILL BE OVER

from my other writerscafe id HEART OF LOVE which is ONLY for SONNETS of love and its passion.

DISTANCE WILL BE OVER

@Saddam husen^®

 

 

I was just blowing with current,
My heart is beating with own force 
No thirst, not hunger; only your precedent

(of love) 
I want to meet you, all my source. 

The day, you fold me in your arms;
Still I can feel your heat;
That special day and your feelings warms 
And that very first kiss on lip. 

All your support in weal and woe 
I want then relive them all;
Your good morning wish in joy 
Your accompany till the day fall. 

Soon the distance will be over 
I and you will accomplish for ever.

 

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Reviews

[Ana B.]

An incredible poem, written by a truly romantic and poetic heart. Wonderful write my dear.

[Ruth]

Lovely emotion here, love can usually win most battles :)

[janzsuico]

I can feel how real love is when being tested by distance.
Good read.

[Mitali Shah]

True feelings poured out. Good one Saddam

[anne]

beauty soaked in love...:))

[Lyndy]

Nice and beautiful poem, a lovely one! :D

[nazia]

Beautiful. A lovely expression of love for one who is far away yet so near your heart. Nice, fluid and romantic write Saddam :)

[AaronFreitas]

This is a really beautiful poem my friend. Great work on this I am glad you shared :)

[Jeyanthi]

i really like the setting of this poem..
penetrating into hopes and determination..
awesome poem Saddam. :)

[Matching Socks]

Romantic and passionate writing, love can not be bound by space and time.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome. :)