THIS VALENTINE

This valentine

 

Into the sunshine

   You in this white dress

      Like fairy white.

 

Fresh and beautiful

   Like a flower after rain

      New and bright.

 

I’m your liege

   Crazy for your attractive refulgence

      And your voice.

 

Your blue eyes

   Risen up my every abyss

      For your embrace.

 

Your naughty hair on lip

   Moonlight on cheek

      I hate them, actually, deep.

 

For saying; assume my dare

   THIS VALENTINE; I will say to you

      Will you be mine, forever?

Reviews

[Jewel Chanda]

SAAD,.... another cute poem... lovely one... :)

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear. Really appreciate your words.

[Jewel Chanda]

welcome friend :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Valentine has already gone. LOL.
Kidding, the poem is amazing. I like the way you potray your love poems so well. Maybe you excel in them.(:

[Saddam]

Thank you soooo much dear friend. Glad you like it.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a beautiful and sweet poem. Nicely written.

Kaze~ :-D

[Saddam]

Great Thanks to you dear.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Brook]

This is very beautiful, and romantic. I love it.
Definitely my favourite.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. I'm glad you like it.

[Sami Khalil]

One of your best poet. I like the form and font too...Bravo sir...:).............

[Saddam]

It's like a bonus from you Sir. Thank you so much.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)..................

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautiful hun...really enjoyed :) x

[Saddam]

Thank you dear. appreciated Your words.

[maria ( rose)]

saaaaweet! full of passion & romance. Well done my friend:)
-maria

[Saddam]

Thank you soooo much deeeaaar.

[maria ( rose)]

:))) your too wonderful ..always making me smile

[Lydia Shutter]

Blissfully romantic words! The imagery you employ is gentle and velvety soft. Absolutely lovely. Lydi**

[Saddam]

thank you dear....

[Angel Criner]

Ooooh lovely... the flow's so refreshingly enticing. I love it.

[Saddam]

thank you dear...love you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sweeeeeet one Ssadd it was romantic for true :)

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend. love you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)