THIS VALENTINE

This valentine

 

Into the sunshine

   You in this white dress

      Like fairy white.

 

Fresh and beautiful

   Like a flower after rain

      New and bright.

 

I’m your liege

   Crazy for your attractive refulgence

      And your voice.

 

Your blue eyes

   Risen up my every abyss

      For your embrace.

 

Your naughty hair on lip

   Moonlight on cheek

      I hate them, actually, deep.

 

For saying; assume my dare

   THIS VALENTINE; I will say to you

      Will you be mine, forever?

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Sweet Valentine.

NOTE: I recommend you choose a different word than "lust," which can have negative connotations.

[Deepika]

A cute read! I enjoyed it..Keep writing :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.
Actually you are very cute. It is you in the picture?

[Deepika]

Yep.thank u :)

[Saddam]

You are beautiful.......
Keep that smile on your face always.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

You have beautifully captured love in two opposite shades. Beautifully penned, SSADD!☺

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend, I am so glad.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Pleasure is mine!☺

[Ishita Dixit]

Very beautiful!
Sweet and simple.
Nice job

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[Dara]

This is a very thought provoking write. Both romantic and bittersweet it speaks volumes about the pain and ecstasy of love. Well done!

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend............

[katja]

a lovely little write filled with sweet sentiments...
... thank you for sharing
~yekaterina

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear, You are so sweet.

[star73]

awe :( so sad very nice! well done

[Saddam]

THANKS A LOT DEAR. IT IS VERY NICE TO HEAR YOU.

[EmilyBianca]

This poem describes how I feel about my one true love.

[Saddam]

Lovely you are dear. Thank you so much. I am at eighth sky.

[s y e]

This is so cute, SSADD......!

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear.

[M.K. Jawdat]

sweet and well written nice poetry

[Saddam]

Really appreciate your words dear. Thank you very much.