THIS VALENTINE

This valentine

 

Into the sunshine

   You in this white dress

      Like fairy white.

 

Fresh and beautiful

   Like a flower after rain

      New and bright.

 

I’m your liege

   Crazy for your attractive refulgence

      And your voice.

 

Your blue eyes

   Risen up my every abyss

      For your embrace.

 

Your naughty hair on lip

   Moonlight on cheek

      I hate them, actually, deep.

 

For saying; assume my dare

   THIS VALENTINE; I will say to you

      Will you be mine, forever?

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Nice words... loaded with emotion! Good valentines poem :)

[Sindu]

beautifully written saddam :) This has an innocent energy to it.
Maybe replace the one word lust ?

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...

[Lyndy]

Oh wow, this is beautiful and well written. Good poem for Valentine's Day. hahaha.

[Ana B.]

Beautiful words, beautiful font and beautiful emotions. Brilliant work!

[Ruth]

You always give a smile through your writing...glad to read you today xo

[Saddam]

Thank you so much for your time dear..

[Prashant Pandey]

fresh and beautiful. every single line is adorable.

[I Am Svetlana]

Awe, this was adorable and I loved the depth!

[anne]

awwwh..it is so beautiful..a very lovely read..amazing flow and beautiful look and interpretation with true heart feelings..:))

[Roshan Nair]

Great work saddam. I liked the depth of love and emotions this piece has show along with the cadence the rhymes create. Good job!

[T. Adams]

First read, "hair on lip" sounds like a mustache. I know that's not what you intended, but that's what I instinctually thought.