A DAY DREAM

 

From the heave to the mountain

Coming a wave of snowy rain.

 

Every where is snow;

But I want to go

Go, for a beautiful journey

As the pleasure of air blow.

 

I am going in sky; in sky- very high

Here are blue clouds and wind is shy.

Sudden, I stay; here is sweet spray

But where I am; am I stray?

 

No, I am right; coming a golden light

I proceed on the way, I flying like a kite.

 

I reached the destination

I stand and saw the reaction; of fire and air-

What is the action?

 

The action of air as I am its share

The river’s water is sweet

I stood when I care.

 

It is that destination

From there; we come for action

And over your work; we shall go with satisfaction.

 

Looking roundly, I proceed forward

For comment I have no word

In a great field, there were majority of people

But there was no crowd.

 

 I saw a sited man on a big chair

‘HE’ looking everyone with very care

‘HE’ had a great book; and misses any name it’s rare.

 

Suddenly I heard my name

I think it is rhyme; but astonished-

Yes, it is the same.

 

I go near, but can’t see ‘HIM’ clear

‘HE’ explained to me; you will go in fire.

 

I cried- No! No!

But two angles take me and go

They put me in fire

I cried loudly- Alas! Oh! Oh!

 

My ears listen- What happens?

With my open eyes; I saw my family

They look me with great attention.

 

I tell them and laugh; now every situation was soft

It is dangerous dream;

I will not tell anyone, it is tuff.

Author's Note

Brace yourself.....

Reviews

[Penny]

Your best poem yet. A very vivid description of heaven, you hav't missed anything. Rhyming scheme is also good. Nicely penned, well done.

[Saddam]

thank you dear for your lovely comment at my imagination.... Love you...

[Penny]

My pleasure. And no need to love me, love yourself, its the best thing to do:-)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

A nightmare...but I think it brought you something to ponder...about how man's actions would lead him to heaven or hell.

Nice piece.

[Saddam]

exactly....thanks for read...love you.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome. =)

[Sami Khalil]

A nightmare or vision perhaps. I felt the agony of the experience at the end...Bravo , sir...:)......................

[Saddam]

thank you dear sir...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The need for bracing is intense indeed, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

thank you dear poet. love you.