A DAY DREAM

 

From the heave to the mountain

Coming a wave of snowy rain.

 

Every where is snow;

But I want to go

Go, for a beautiful journey

As the pleasure of air blow.

 

I am going in sky; in sky- very high

Here are blue clouds and wind is shy.

Sudden, I stay; here is sweet spray

But where I am; am I stray?

 

No, I am right; coming a golden light

I proceed on the way, I flying like a kite.

 

I reached the destination

I stand and saw the reaction; of fire and air-

What is the action?

 

The action of air as I am its share

The river’s water is sweet

I stood when I care.

 

It is that destination

From there; we come for action

And over your work; we shall go with satisfaction.

 

Looking roundly, I proceed forward

For comment I have no word

In a great field, there were majority of people

But there was no crowd.

 

 I saw a sited man on a big chair

‘HE’ looking everyone with very care

‘HE’ had a great book; and misses any name it’s rare.

 

Suddenly I heard my name

I think it is rhyme; but astonished-

Yes, it is the same.

 

I go near, but can’t see ‘HIM’ clear

‘HE’ explained to me; you will go in fire.

 

I cried- No! No!

But two angles take me and go

They put me in fire

I cried loudly- Alas! Oh! Oh!

 

My ears listen- What happens?

With my open eyes; I saw my family

They look me with great attention.

 

I tell them and laugh; now every situation was soft

It is dangerous dream;

I will not tell anyone, it is tuff.

Author's Note

Brace yourself.....

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Very imaginative poem you have there. I like it. :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Sorry for the late reviews Saddam... but it is a beautiful poem written in a soothing flow... i enjoyed it....

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend....

[Ana B.]

An amazing journey, exquisite work my dear :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[Lyndy]

I love this poem. It's very imaginative and inspiring! :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much, Means a lot dear.

[prajakta]

really enjoyed this,it was interesting:-)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[Ruth]

Holds character Saddam...you engaged your reader from beginning to end friend...

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear, I'm glad you like it.

[Deepika]

Great work dear friend! I enjoyed it :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...

[Mitali Shah]

Good one Saddam. God bless

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome piece Saddam! It had a good rhyming scheme and flow throughout the entire poem. Sends the message the for all out actions there will be consequences whether we like it or not. Good work my friend!

[Saddam]

Thank you very much Aaron for this warm review.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is very insightful my friend.We must realize that our actions have consequences :)

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)