PAINFUL LOVE - I

 

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I

O dear! O dear!

Come near; come near!

Why are you going far mile?

My heart is so fragile!

How can you leave me in crematorium?

After, my life’s hope is minimum

You treat me like a thing of consume

Your rudeness for me is queer.

 

II

O dear! O dear!

Come near; come near!

I think which days promises

Your, to live all days long and happiness

I always said " “I accept”

But currently you say " “it’s except”

Then I have no any expect

Even dead fear.

 

III

O dear! O dear!

Why you go far for ever.

The world is, for me too, curse

I am too near to death course

This is off bear

Shortly people will took bier

My feelings is, for you, not differ

In heaven we’ll be always near.

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

"In heaven we'll always be near".... this I believe is a lie which we say to ourselves... no one has seen heaven or hell....even I feel this for the people I miss in my life.... we all are alike.... the emotions rule us... but a nice work this one....

[Saddam]

Yea! you are right bro... thank you so much dear friend.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

What a beautiful piece. :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :)

[Jeyanthi]

Heart wrenching poem... To hold lost love and to move on the same path even if we are treated like nothing is the hardest thing, and you beautifully expressed in this poem. :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear poet

[Deepika]

A good piece saddam! Your works are getting better day by day and it's great!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much for this encouragement...

[Ana B.]

A beautiful , perfect work my dear :) Lovely writing!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear......

[Parimal Pratyush]

Good good write, my friend. You are improving and that's pretty amazing. :D

[Saddam]

Thank you so much....

[Matching Socks]

Such deep emotions Saddam, very sad. When our love leaves us, they still live on in our hearts forever.
Beautiful poem.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear .......

[brezybaby3]

This is sad. But true love often is. Beautifully written.

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend.

[nazia]

This is wonderful Saddam. beautiful, pure and fluid at the same time. :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...

[Elisa]

I like how you went through different stages of her leaving, coupled with different stages of your mourning. Thank you for this piece.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear for such a insightful view.