BILLETd'AMOUR

 

I am just counting my hours

My horse is galloping in joy

This sunny morning brings your freshness

And its warm feels me your spray.

 

Whenever I see your innocent image

Whenever I woke up in midnight hours

Whenever your memory frenzied me

With my blood I wrote Billet d’Amour.

 

All my enraged, all my regale

Which turmoil in my deep heart

Every clasp with pillow in peevish

Your looming image which I feel

My rage with you when you hurt

And my love which I has realize.

Reviews

[prajakta]

beautiful piece:-)nice usage of words.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear for your time..

[Lyndy]

Oh wow, this is a nice poem! I like it very much.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear for this lovely comment.

[EmilyBianca]

I really like this line: "My rage with you when you hurt
and my love which I had realize".

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This poem is written perfectly, outstanding.

Kaze~

[Saddam]

Thank you soo much dear.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

It was my pleasure. ^_^

[Simran Kewlani]

Really well written. I like the way you have related the first two lines. (:

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.

[maria ( rose)]

I am just counting my hours
My horse is galloping in joy.... Simply breathtaking. The whole poem is very beautiful. Thank you for sharing:)
-maria

[Saddam]

Thank you dear for Your stop. Glad you like.

[maria ( rose)]

your very welcome!! I love to read all your poems.

[Saddam]

Thank you again dear. I'm also read Your poetry first at my colomn. Thanks.

[Sandipan Majhi]

wow... really beautiful one ..... its really nice

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[Frieda P]

Sigh worthy love letter Ssadd....just gorgeous and heartfelt.

'And its warm feels me your spray', think you meant 'warmth' and perhaps fills me, not sure that sentence works, still, love this one....

[Saddam]

Every thing your are suggesting me, i'll change soon. Thank you very much for your deep view.

[ANCIENTRUNAWAY]

It amazes me how beautiful and original you write! My lord, this is breathtaking and insightful. KEEP ON WRITING, my love !

Keep Calm and Carry On

[Saddam]

Thank you sooo much dear. Your quote is superb cool. I like that.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Great show.. Good piece..

Keep writing!!!

[Saddam]

Heartly thanks to you dear. It is nice you find my work good.