YOUR MEMORY

Every time

Every moment�"day and night

I followed by a shadow

Not it is my will; or my destiny.

 

It has mix up with my nerve as blood

A chronic nightmare in heart

But how is it?

It pooh-poohed on me in happiness

In my anxious state

It lulled me and escape

But always tease me like sores.

 

At that deep scar

Sometimes I yelled; sometimes I pride

Sometimes confused, sometimes familiar

But always uttered a sweet joy.

 

In loneness, I talked myself

Between people, found myself alone

Only one thing makes me blither�"cheerful

Only one thing is awfully expensive for me

Your memory of sweet days

Memory of my first amazing feelings

Your memory which you had wrote.

Reviews

[Dara]

Your words are heartfelt and tender. We can keep our loved ones alive through our memories. Thank you for sharing.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear for your time and words...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Nice poem Ssadd your words of memories and love are very heartfelt :)

[Saddam]

thanks dear friend for your lovely compliments.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[janzsuico]

Your memory of sweet days
Memory of my first amazing feelings..

These lines are flashback of what I had experienced..... wonderful lines !

[Saddam]

i'm glad that you are attached with my thought....thank you for read...love you.

[Latifa]

nicely written I love it.

[Saddam]

thanks dear.

[Shaquana Adams]

Your memory of sweet days
Memory of my first amazing feelings
Your memory which you had wrote

Absolutely beautiful. I love this... It's so emotional and sweet.

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend for this lovely review.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching, emotional piece that reads perfectly, well done.

[Saddam]

thanks for this touching review.

[AYVID N]

A touching story of lost love, haunting memories and lonliness. Beautifully expressed.

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend divya.

[Radhika]

'In loneness, I talked myself
Between people, found myself alone'

these lines truely depict the position of a person in memories of that special one!
Heartfelt poem !