YOUR MEMORY

Every time

Every moment�"day and night

I followed by a shadow

Not it is my will; or my destiny.

 

It has mix up with my nerve as blood

A chronic nightmare in heart

But how is it?

It pooh-poohed on me in happiness

In my anxious state

It lulled me and escape

But always tease me like sores.

 

At that deep scar

Sometimes I yelled; sometimes I pride

Sometimes confused, sometimes familiar

But always uttered a sweet joy.

 

In loneness, I talked myself

Between people, found myself alone

Only one thing makes me blither�"cheerful

Only one thing is awfully expensive for me

Your memory of sweet days

Memory of my first amazing feelings

Your memory which you had wrote.

Reviews

[Patricia]

Really beautiful! I like your word choice

[Ana B.]

What a melancholic and relatable little gem, gorgeous writing my dear....i think all of uf feel alone between people....

[nazia]

memories, they always keep us on toes, thinking, reliving the moments, trying to weave a picture perfect future out of them. a very well written work here :)

[Saddam]

Thank you for these sweet words.

[prajakta]

good work..thanks for sharing:-)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much.....

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Very well written with emotions clearly outlined in the poetry.
The last line is expressive and intriguing.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend....

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome.

[Lyndy]

Oh wow, this poem is amazing! Keep up the good work. :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much.....

[Saddam]

Thank you so much.....

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Good one Saddam.... nice work .....life is sometimes very difficult.... but we have to keep moving....

[Saddam]

Thank you so much friend....

[Deepika]

Things may change in course of time, but memories remain the same ever. lovely piece of work dear friend :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend for this.....

[Gurleen Saluja]

A poetry with seemingly deep roots. Amazing. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear for this wonderful comment.