SECOND LOVE

You ask me to be your second love

Smugly my heart is pondering for my first one

I’m not avowed but can’t leave you

Because my heart is thinking for none;

 

From that time to this

My heart is floating and sinking

Though I am a girl too

I can feel your girlfriend’s thinking;

 

Your succinct maze of words

Being scorn on rapt: I’m in confusion

In state of intoxicate, swimming on clouds

Disdain or accept this transgression;

 

It is chicanery or my vague

But your second love is my first love.  

 

By Saddam Husen

©saddamhusen2015 

Reviews

[Talia The Hedgehog]

what a thoughtful poem upon the ones that we love and the ones we hate. what a great read.

[Saddam]

excellent thought dear friend... thank you very much.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Another excellent write my friend :)

[Saddam]

thank you dear...

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Shaquana Adams]

I love this poem.

It is chicanery or my vague
But your second love is my first love.

Very nicely penned :)

[Saddam]

thank you dear poet.

[Mary Steffen]

Very good and I understood this very well!
Chose the right words and very creative with your writing. Keep up with the good work and I want to keep on reading your works.

[Saddam]

thank you dear poet... thanks for this encouragement. loveya

[Penny]

Nyc poem. When we reject sum1 outri8 for a bad experience of our past, we usually don't think dat by doing this we are making him experience sumthing very similar. A really thought provoking piece. Thanks for sharing

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend for this locely review.

[Penny]

Anytime...