DOLEFUL PALACE

 

 

My roses had faded

Its scent of joy has gone

Someday ago; in my flower garden

There was a sweet spring

But now every petals and leaf had departed

Somewhere tossed and quakes rose was

Now there is black skull.

Now; only reminiscences has left

A misty hum of yours

Some paintings on wall and its saga

It not immune me but witting

Darkness of gloom had engulfed me

It is accepted; I am enjoying-

Loneness of this doleful palace ….

Reviews

[Ana B.]

Raw and emotional, this one is sad and charmingly beautiful. Wonderful done my dear :)

[Saddam]

Thanks sweetie....

[Jeyanthi]

Its really picturing the palace garden filled with happy blooms and after darkness ghost is haunting on back... Its very inspiring poem. I like it. :)

[Saddam]

thank you dear....

[Matching Socks]

Such sweet melancholy.
Lovely poem my friend.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend....

[Matching Socks]

You are welcome!

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

very nice,sad nd heart touching

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

your always welcome g

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so splendidly written Ssadd if though a bit heart wrenching .

[Saddam]

thanks dear...love you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome hunny :)

[Queen]

very nice and sad..I love your poem.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear very much

[Sami Khalil]

"Someday ago; in my flower garden

There was a sweet spring'
You write beautiful and sweet poems...Bravo.......................

[Saddam]

Thank you for this beautiful review.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)...................

[Julie Spade]

Brief, sweet and loads of imagery ! The poem shows darkness and the feeling of hopelessness until the last sentence wraps it all up in the smartest way to accept your destiny and positivity!

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend.... I likes your encouragement words... thanks dear friend.

[MsJewel]

Someday ago; in my flower garden
There was a sweet spring

I love your metaphor of spring in this poem - We all wish for spring and it will be here again my friend.

:) Julie

[Saddam]

hope so my dear friend... thanks for this nice compliment.

[Penny]

Sad but nyc poem. Keep writing

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend.

[Penny]

Your welcome.