DOLEFUL PALACE

 

 

My roses had faded

Its scent of joy has gone

Someday ago; in my flower garden

There was a sweet spring

But now every petals and leaf had departed

Somewhere tossed and quakes rose was

Now there is black skull.

Now; only reminiscences has left

A misty hum of yours

Some paintings on wall and its saga

It not immune me but witting

Darkness of gloom had engulfed me

It is accepted; I am enjoying-

Loneness of this doleful palace ….

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Poignant, almost musical lines. This could be the beginnings of a lyric.

[micky]

I gave up on trying to be this sunny bright bubble happy person...to me I have excepted that im attracted to darkness and im content with it....EMBRACE who you are....F**k what every one else thinks...awesome piece

[Avinash]

This one is quite poignant and a beautiful melody with melancholic reverberations.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend, Always pleased to see you.

[Ruth]

Sometimes we need to embrace the darkness within our self to see the light again...powerful...

[Saddam]

Thank you so muc dear friend.

[Prashant Pandey]

first of all Title is most suitable. appropriate words and the flow made this poem very touchy. great work.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much, I'm glad.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

What I liked most about this poem is the flow of the thoughts... its just amazing... good work

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.....

[nazia]

This is so simple, calm and peaceful. LOve the writing Saddam. simply brilliant :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear....

[Sindu]

It is so softly written :) there is a beauty in his sadness but the joy from acceptance.
Neat write!

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend. Al;ways pleasant to hear you....

[Deepika]

This is one of your best works Saddam :) keep up!

[Saddam]

Thank you dear... Those are my early writes.

[Lyndy]

This poem is amazing, I can truly feel how the poet is feeling!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much for this warming review.