SOMETHING IN YOU

Something in your smile speaks to me

Something in your voice sings to me

Something in your eyes tells me

That you are the dearest person to me.

 

Something in your speech fascinated me

Something in your face enlightens me

Something in your laugh makes me rejoice

And then I have no choice.

 

Except to know you're the one I always love to see

Something about you makes me want to care

Something in you is so rich and rare

For you are the one person that I can trust

And there is something in your charm

That will never rust.

 

Reviews

[Busiku Halwiindi]

Aaaaawh very touching and single..

[Saddam]

thank you dear.....

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is incredibly sweet. I love it.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear for this sweet comment.

[Sue Hart]

An impressive poem. Praise for the one you love. I liked the way it read. Good work.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear for this impressive review.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear for this impressive review.

[Rida Sarwar]

really cute :) loved it! rhyme is awesome ;)

[Saddam]

thanks dear....thank you very much fir your cute review.

[MsJewel]

Simply beautiful!

:) Julie

[Saddam]

thank you very much.

[almost there]

wow awesome writing! That moment someone means so much to you and barely even know they do. smh love that moment

[Saddam]

thank you for this lovely review.

[Ahena MK]

Something in your smile speaks to me
Something in your voice sings to me
Something in your eyes tells me
That you are the dearest person to me. ....
wonderful rhyme....
lovely poem
good read
ahena

[Saddam]

thank you for this wonderful review.

[Sami Khalil]

Something in your speech facinated( fascinates) me
Something in your face enlightens me
Something in your laugh make me rejoice
And then I have no choice.


A very good poem . Thank you for your pen...:)...................