SOMETHING IN YOU

Something in your smile speaks to me

Something in your voice sings to me

Something in your eyes tells me

That you are the dearest person to me.

 

Something in your speech fascinated me

Something in your face enlightens me

Something in your laugh makes me rejoice

And then I have no choice.

 

Except to know you're the one I always love to see

Something about you makes me want to care

Something in you is so rich and rare

For you are the one person that I can trust

And there is something in your charm

That will never rust.

 

Reviews

[janzsuico]

This is beautiful to read in front of a lover. Sounds romantic.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear..

[Zanne]

Very nice piece, well done :)

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend.

[RubyOmma]

For constructive criticism, I would write {there is something} in those first few lines... try it out and see how it feels. Great writing!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear..

[Avinash]

This is a very adorable form of poetry. Thanks for inviting.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.... Always have a pleasure to read your thought.

[Cool Girl]

beautiful words and a beautiful tale :)

[Saddam]

Thanks dear friend...

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome:)

[child of God]

A beautiful write the lines flows wonderfully thank you for sharing it was a pleasure to read

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend....

[stars are far]

That waas very great work, i loved the love you are showing here. well done

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear poet and beloved friend..

[stars are far]

alwasy my pleasure

[Lyndy]

i love this poem! It's very beautiful and sweet! :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear.....

[Kamari's]

Everlasting love amazing there is a light in all love

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend............

[Kamari's]

Anytime you are welcome

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Aww! This poem is so lovely and heartwarming... the eternal and everlasting love!!

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem dear friend. Have a lovely day! :D

- Anjana

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear for your heartwarming review. Glad you like it.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

You're welcome! :) :)