YOUR LOVE

Your love is with me, always.

As I start walking towards the darkness

I heard a dear full voice

It was you, telling me

" Don't be afraid, I'm just behind you."

 

Pushing me through the milling crowd

With no space to stand or breath

I remember your words

"You are not alone, I'm with you."

 

When hot waves lashed me

You say- "Relax, I'm always with you."

I feel you around.

 

Your love is the ocean of happiness

Your love is the pillow for my dream

Your love is the depth of happiness. 

Author's Note

Your love is the depth of happiness.

Reviews

[Ricky Campbell]

Needs work on slight grammar slip-ups, but other than that, this is great!

[Elisa]

This is my favorite poem of yours so far! So simplistic in diction, yet so beautiful and comforting in theme. Gorgeous poem!

[stars are far]

wow that so sweet and depth of happiness..yes it is.
well done. that was full of love

[SoulWriter]

A nice poem. It is really emotional.
Good work

[Chris]

"miling" or milling?

a caring and sensitive expression

[Saddam]

Thank you so much. It is typing mistake.

[Brittany Zedalis]

I really, really like this poem. :]

[Saddam]

thank you dear for this lovely review.

[Rida Sarwar]

beautiful! really romantic :D

[Saddam]

thank you very much for this beautiful review.

[Rida Sarwar]

welcome :)

[MsJewel]

Beautifully sweet and romantic. You have touched my heart with this one.

One little edit - in the first line walk should be walking.

A beautiful, beautiful poem!
:) Julie

[Saddam]

thank for review this. thank you for pointuot my mistake, i will edit it very soin.

[Little Bird]

You have an amazing way with words... your poems are always extremely touching, well thought out and easily understandable yet mysterious

[Saddam]

thanks for this amazing reveiw

[Sami Khalil]

"Your love is the ocean of happiness

Your love is the pillow for my dream

Your love is the depth of happiness"

Love can be sweet as honey and fluffy like clouds...Bravo................

[Saddam]

Thank you very much sir, you incourage me very first. That's I always expect at every post. Thanks sir being with me

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome ...Any time...:).............