YOUR LOVE

Your love is with me, always.

As I start walking towards the darkness

I heard a dear full voice

It was you, telling me

" Don't be afraid, I'm just behind you."

 

Pushing me through the milling crowd

With no space to stand or breath

I remember your words

"You are not alone, I'm with you."

 

When hot waves lashed me

You say- "Relax, I'm always with you."

I feel you around.

 

Your love is the ocean of happiness

Your love is the pillow for my dream

Your love is the depth of happiness. 

Author's Note

Your love is the depth of happiness.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Lovely :)

[Ruth]

Tenderly poised and aglow, lovely :)

[Deepika]

I enjoyed reading it. good one saddam, esp. the last stanza :)

[Ana B.]

Beautiful, beautiful write my friend, looove the last stanza, it is about everything a heart could want.....

[Lyndy]

Wow, what a marvelous feeling to hear that voice! Nice written poem! :)

[Jeyanthi]

The words in the lines are filled with hope, that's what all one needs in love. Beautifully written Saddam. :)

[Zanne]

I love the closing line "Your love is the depth of happiness". Well written. Very romantic

[T. Adams]

Beautiful. The simplicity of this piece allows the reader to fit the words into their own life experiences. So wonderful.

[nazia]

What an encouraging love story.. Especially liked the tone of it throughout.. Its like everywhere you go this love is actually inside you..

[Neo]

This is a really sweet poem. I tend to be super anxious about things, and forget that I have people I love all around me. I really like the ideas in the three separate stanzas, and the repetition at the end. It solidifies the ideas and brings the poem to a close in s good way. Thanks for sharing. :)