ONE SIDE LOVE

How can I prevent my heart!

Why I rebuke for looking you!

 

Your covered face with hair

Your twinkled eyes with little water

Your voice with blowing banter

And all act which seems me fare.

 

How can I all stop that?

You are saying it's over

But it will be end never

Always will be, far and near

 

In my heart, your image is saved and clear.

Not you, then for vision are what?

You livid me, with decision hard!

But I'll spend my time, moaning you!

Reviews

[Zanne]

We've all been there at some point. Nice (however sad) little piece again :)

[RubyOmma]

Moving piece. I cam feel your love and loss in the writing well done!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.........

[nazia]

Painfully sad yet beautiful

[Saddam]

Thanks dear Nazia......Means lot.

[Ana B.]

the last line is very original. Lovely, my dear :)

[Saddam]

Thanks dear...... It means very much to me...

[hardeep sabharwal]

One sided love is always painful, but life is life and we have to move,, a nice read

[Saddam]

Thanks dear friend..... Glad you like it..

[stars are far]

That was very great work, i can relate.. well done :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...

[Lyndy]

Nice poem! A beautiful one!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[Elisa]

Ahhh, unrequited love. It's such an isolating experience, but we all go through it.

[Saddam]

It is........... Thanks a lot dear for giving it your time.

[Roshan Nair]

Theres pain and there's love and seldom do they leave each others side.. great write saddam. There's hope for each soul in having patience with the heart. cheers

[Saddam]

Thank you so much Roshan.

[Barbz]

I question words as they appear, although the message is quite clear. At time life seems to fall apart, dealing with matters of the heart. Fear not, time is a friend, and truth will grace us in the end. Barbz

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...