MY LIFE

Once I met life

Ugly, with pain and suffering

Naked, having soul's wound ailing.

I tried not to heed

But life followed me instead .

I ran away, unaware of facts

And sure all the skillful tact

I thought I had left life for behind

But it was an illusion in my mind.

'Cos when I reached home and opened the door

The life was waiting for me.

 

It hugged, kissed and squad by me

And said "I'm your reality, accept me

For I'm what you made me."

Thunders crashed when I found

That I'd done nothing soothing

Beautiful, creative and sound .

And as I decided to start

These a while

I saw life gave me a sweet smile.

Reviews

[Julie Spade]

Perfect! This poem spoke to me in several different ways to the point where I almost teared up (I am a cry baby)! It brings me to a place that I didnt wish to be in as of right now since I have always ran away from my life...writing and doing other things but now that I have read this poem I am now inspired to take my past/life head on!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.....

[Lyndy]

This poem is lovely, I love it! ^^

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend.

[Roshan Nair]

Great post man, speaks the true words of reality knocking on ones door and the fact that escape is only temporary.
Cheers!

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Nice subject matter and your ending line is wonderful! :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much my dear friend.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Beautiful imagination, you have got, SSADD! You have expressed it amazingly too.☺

A poem very well penned showcasing reality of life. Thanks for sharing.

-Anjana

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend. I appreciate your words.

[Andrew Liddy]

Wow this is really good an excellent piece.

[Saddam]

So much thanks to you dear friend.

[Ishita Dixit]

Very honest and beautiful!
Nicely done

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear.............

[Rida Sarwar]

quite imaginative and a good work ;)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.. I appreciate your words.

[Ahena MK]

wonderfully crafted !!!
ahena :)

[Saddam]

thanks dear

[costa siwale]

This poem speaks to me, I tried running away from my current life, it didn't work, so am slowly accepting things. Well written poem

[Saddam]

thank you dear poet...