FIRST LOVE--I FORGET

It is difficult to forget first love, but I forget

It is very severe to forget your first love

First sight of love,

Her hair, her smile, her grace;

 

The place, where you propose her

The first proposal word,

And your impulse and her face;

 

The very first meeting state

Her charming look and your eagerness

Your naughtiness and her patience;

 

First act of silliness

First time of rain in love

Your aloneness with long distance;

For me it is unuseful to call,

Because I forget that all.

Reviews

[Cerise]

A good write on first love...Everyone has those typical first love memories in rain...the first date...Alot of first's....well if u r lucky enugh ur first will b ur last or else it just means that person wasnt gud enough for u and u have to move on because God is gonna pair you up with someone much bettr..:)..Great write..

[xDalliance]

Very touching and thoughtful poem. The words and arrangement of words is very good. The theme of the first love is also very good. Amazing work!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.... Glad you like.

[Radhika]

Very beautiful and relatable !
But i think one can never forget their first love ...and although you say you have ...your poem doesn't say so my friend :)

[Saddam]

yes it was hard but i did so. it is in my nerve. thanks you found it relatable.

[costa siwale]

Wow, very interesting piece.

[Saddam]

It is my happiness you like it sir.. thank you.

[Julie Spade]

Throughout the poem, I emotionally sense the struggle and the hardships of forgetting your first love. I, too, understand where you are coming from I mean the whole concept of when it is too painfully your brain just erases it all ! I believe you have great courage and a load of guts, even when you are in pain you write beautifully that my friend is a true poet in my book.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear!!!!!!!

[Brenna]

Beautifully written! I think we can all relate to this

[Saddam]

thank you dear very much.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sometimes when we have been hurt we try to forget but it doesn't always work.Well penned and heartfelt Ssadd.

[Saddam]

thanks dear poet.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Ahena MK]

well written !!!
:) ahena

[Saddam]

thanks dear

[MsJewel]

Something tells me you have not forgotten...
Do we ever forget our first love? I don't think so. At least for me, I choose only to forget the sad times and remember the love. I wish that for you my friend.

:) Julie

[Penny]

Truly describes 1st love but couldn't why you forgot all that.

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend....i forget that all...why...it is long story.....and i can not unfold my story. it give me always pain.

[Penny]

No need. After all pain is the common factor in evert love storys and the ones unfulfilled too. Take care :-)

[Saddam]

thanks you dear....