FIRST LOVE--I FORGET

It is difficult to forget first love, but I forget

It is very severe to forget your first love

First sight of love,

Her hair, her smile, her grace;

 

The place, where you propose her

The first proposal word,

And your impulse and her face;

 

The very first meeting state

Her charming look and your eagerness

Your naughtiness and her patience;

 

First act of silliness

First time of rain in love

Your aloneness with long distance;

For me it is unuseful to call,

Because I forget that all.

Reviews

[Cerise]

A good write on first love...Everyone has those typical first love memories in rain...the first date...Alot of first's....well if u r lucky enugh ur first will b ur last or else it just means that person wasnt gud enough for u and u have to move on because God is gonna pair you up with someone much bettr..:)..Great write..

[SmittyJas]

charming I suppose sniff the rose underneath your nose don't forget your first kiss for it might be the last on your list There will be other gals to reminisces But you shouldn't forget your first kiss. Sweet poem.

[Stefanie Holmes]

Never can someone forget their first love... lovely write!

~Stefanie

[Saddam]

Nice to hear you dear. Thank you so much.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An act most can never think of let alone execute, well done!

[Saddam]

Thank you friend. I am pleased to hear you again.

[EmilyBianca]

Really nice job on it. You are a great writer

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.

[Tina Louise UK]

Touching piece hun...it is sad when we can no longer remember, enjoyed :) x

[Saddam]

Glad you like dear. Love you.

[Tina Louise UK]

ur welcome hun :) x

[maria ( rose)]

First act of silliness
First time of rain in love)..love the concept & the way your words flow with so much emotion, this is a powerful but beautiful write.
thank you for sharing.
maria♥

[Saddam]

I'm much pleased to hear you dear. Very powerful feedback dear.. I love your words. Glad, glad.

[maria ( rose)]

♥ that makes me smile..:)

[Brook]

Wonderful job, you're brilliant.

[Saddam]

Thanks for your wonderful comment. love you.

[Frieda P]

We do tend to want to forget those moments in life that didn't go exactly how we planned them to work out, most people do remember their first love since it's that first impact of fluttery awakenings of the heart. Nicely pen'd Ssadd.

[Saddam]

Your words are too kind dear... I'm appreciated you. Glad.

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was mine, enjoyed.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautifully written. Loved it.

Kaze~

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear for your awesome compliment.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-D

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful still see the pain there only love I have had is my husband other then Jesus and my family. and when I was younger it was Crushes never trusted no with my heart it had been hurt so much and has always been very Sensitive and Tender easily hurt and never found any gentlemen until I meet my husband and the 3 guys I knew that were Gentlemen nice guys were just friends I had no love interest just never had good experience with guys most of them where not gentlemen and no manners always after one thing and I have always been your quiet loyal modest Lady so didn't have time for it. but this I see you're are very brave opening your feelings like this BRAVO I love it thank you for sharing. blessings

[Saddam]

Big Big thanks to you dear. Your words are amezing. It filled my heart. Glad glad you like this.