FIRST LOVE--I FORGET

It is difficult to forget first love, but I forget

It is very severe to forget your first love

First sight of love,

Her hair, her smile, her grace;

 

The place, where you propose her

The first proposal word,

And your impulse and her face;

 

The very first meeting state

Her charming look and your eagerness

Your naughtiness and her patience;

 

First act of silliness

First time of rain in love

Your aloneness with long distance;

For me it is unuseful to call,

Because I forget that all.

Reviews

[Cerise]

A good write on first love...Everyone has those typical first love memories in rain...the first date...Alot of first's....well if u r lucky enugh ur first will b ur last or else it just means that person wasnt gud enough for u and u have to move on because God is gonna pair you up with someone much bettr..:)..Great write..

[Ruth]

It is indeed so difficult and yet with time, we do forget...does the heart truly forget like the mind though? Lovely xo

[Lenah Mehzabin]

this poem will encourage all those people who have a broken heart .It has a beautiful and painful punch at the end ! ;)

[Ana B.]

Beautiful yet sad....maybe you made place for new memories. Better ones.
Lovely work!

[Lyndy]

I like this poem. It is very beautiful. :)

[MomzillaNC]

A sweet reminder for all those dudes who don't realize how precious those memories are until they graybeards. I have to add, I don't know any women who cannot recall the most amazing minutiae of their first loves.

[Matching Socks]

Maybe we forget for a reason? So we can move on?
Good write my friend.

[kublakhan27]

My first love just got engaged last week, the ultimate severing of the ties as it pertains to that first love...it's true that you never forget it, but it doesn't mean the memories are always good, especially when you get older and realize that you really did love that first love..more often than not, those memories erode into loneliness...the innocence dies, and all the we're left with is the question of what might have been...a sad piece needless to say, but something that many of us relate to...you've expressed those feelings beautifully here...great work.

[Anne Timmins]

This is enchanting and very beautiful!! Bravo. In the second last line, you use the word "unuseful". Not only is it not a word, it is somewhat confusing