GOD IN A LONELY SOUL

GOD IN A LOnELY SOuL
you seemed to me a lonely soul
though special to my eyes,
i never ever felt so good,
you made my life a wonder world;
i closed my eyes
to keep the dreams you gave me
from slipping out and held me aloft
for all to see me perched in your hands.
you gave wings to my imagination
to soar high over mountains in search of what i
thought was my God
though you were a simple lonely soul!

Reviews

[costa siwale]

This is a thought-triggering piece, quiet philosophical. I enjoyed every bit

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend. I write it one day when I was alone and thinking. Then this idea stuck on my mind. So thanks for supporting my think. Love you all.

[Penny]

Reminds me of my friend, the person i probably love most. Goes without saying how i felt about this poem.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend.

[MsJewel]

Beautifully inspirational and uplifting. Your talent shines in this lovely gem!

:) Julie

[Saddam]

thank you dear

[Sami Khalil]

You write wonderfully. A lonely soul evokes so many questions and demands answers...Bravo............

[Saddam]

thank you very much Sir...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............

[Laminators Dubai]

simple and expressive. simply nice read :)
thanks for sharing :)

[Saddam]

thank you.,.....dear poet....