GOD IN A LONELY SOUL

GOD IN A LOnELY SOuL
you seemed to me a lonely soul
though special to my eyes,
i never ever felt so good,
you made my life a wonder world;
i closed my eyes
to keep the dreams you gave me
from slipping out and held me aloft
for all to see me perched in your hands.
you gave wings to my imagination
to soar high over mountains in search of what i
thought was my God
though you were a simple lonely soul!

Reviews

[child of God]

Beautifully written a big thinker poam thank you for pending

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear, Its mean so much for me

[MomzillaNC]

A kind of prayer and an interesting commentary

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear, appreciate you review friend.

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Prayer like, a most soothing piece, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much....

[Ana B.]

Lovely and soothing in a way.....loved it :)

[Saddam]

I am thrilled you love it. Thank you very much.

[Matching Socks]

Lovely SSADD, so soft and beautiful.

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear................

[Lyndy]

Nice poem. I like it very much. :D

[Jamestown]

Great piece of work and very well thought out.Thanks for sharing.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you for writing this ! : ) certainly i always have the same words to say to God !

[Lino Rie]

Thank you for your entry but I have to say that it wasn't what i was looking for in the contest. Beautiful writing none the less.

[Saddam]

ok dear. thank you very much.

[Mary Steffen]

Very good but I see God as a father or Grandfather figure. Writing is very creative your choice of words are good. Keep up the good work and I never seen God as a lonely soul. Keep writing.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear. it not mean in lonely but it means we can found god in Every one and Every where. thanks again.