SPECIAL FEELING

Let me wake up 

Wake up from this role 

Now a days, I was in sleep 

A hidden flame is burning in my 

heart And it hits me hard. 

I admit my state 

My loneliness has flew away 

And a strange eagerness is on 

Although, next moment, I hurled it out 

But it make me plight. 

When I look you My heart began to loud 

After your soul-stirring smile 

I feel much special and want to always 

And try to stand all the ways. 

From my third eyes I follow you 

Found you in my vision 

Under a big arm tree, middle of green grass 

Where slow wind pass. 

When I think you 

Oft, fleeting clock stopped 

My heart looking for your presence 

For your hug, for your smile_tear and twinkled eyes 

All I recall when I rise.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

not so sure on the Third eye part.
but this has a touch of Romance to it
very nice I am a Romantic. love these lines.
When I think you

Oft, fleeting clock stopped

My heart looking for your presence

For your hug, for your smile_ tear and twinkled eyes

All I recall when I rise.

[Saddam]

third eye means my feelings, my emotions. Thank you very much for read.

[xDalliance]

Very good poem. The feeling of love described softly tenderly. Another amazing one Saddam!

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear....

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful just beautiful.

Kaze~

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear....

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-D

[MsJewel]

Beautifully sweet and romantic. I agree with Sami - I think you are a romantic.

:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thanks for these sweet words. But I think I am try to be romantic.

[Penny]

Surely she must be worth recalling, eh:-P:-D Nyc poem, encourages you to fall in love..

[Saddam]

thanks....but not again.

[Sami Khalil]

A sweet and lovely poem. I think you are a hopeless romantic( a compliment )...Keep up your work...:)...............

[Saddam]

thank you Sir, your words are almost true...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............