SPECIAL FEELING

Let me wake up 

Wake up from this role 

Now a days, I was in sleep 

A hidden flame is burning in my 

heart And it hits me hard. 

I admit my state 

My loneliness has flew away 

And a strange eagerness is on 

Although, next moment, I hurled it out 

But it make me plight. 

When I look you My heart began to loud 

After your soul-stirring smile 

I feel much special and want to always 

And try to stand all the ways. 

From my third eyes I follow you 

Found you in my vision 

Under a big arm tree, middle of green grass 

Where slow wind pass. 

When I think you 

Oft, fleeting clock stopped 

My heart looking for your presence 

For your hug, for your smile_tear and twinkled eyes 

All I recall when I rise.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

not so sure on the Third eye part.
but this has a touch of Romance to it
very nice I am a Romantic. love these lines.
When I think you

Oft, fleeting clock stopped

My heart looking for your presence

For your hug, for your smile_ tear and twinkled eyes

All I recall when I rise.

[Saddam]

third eye means my feelings, my emotions. Thank you very much for read.

[Matching Socks]

Very beautiful. Yes, in Macedonian we have the same expression. Third eye... The inner eye.
We also say watch with "14 eyes" when you need to pay close attention. Lol.
It doesn't quite sound right in English...

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well structured and insightful, a good read.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[EmilyBianca]

you are such an excellent writer, I love this piece.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear. You are also a brillient writer who knows emotions quite well.

[EmilyBianca]

thank you very much

[AYVID N]

A beautiful writing, whichever angle you look at it from. Much applause to you Ssadd. Keep penning.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much for your kind words...

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautiful Ssadd...enjoyed :) x

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear...

[maria ( rose)]

When I think you
Oft, fleeting clock stopped
My heart looking for your presence
.....Love these words you put into this stanza. wow a well written beautiful poem about love♥
--maria

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.....

[Brook]

Very beautiful, well done.

[Saddam]

thank you dear.

[Saddam]

thank you dear....

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Just beautiful Ssaad you are a true romantic :)

[Saddam]

Thank yoy so much dear friend.... yes romantic with no one. hahahaha...

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.... yes romantic with no one. hahahaha...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha no on as yet you mean yes.You are welcome :)