MY HEART'S VOICE

MY HEART'S VOICE

by Saddam Husen

Listen, my beating heart's voice 

It is not always rise 

To say, with everybody 

It is not not every time sing a Melody. 

It is not obeying my command 

Every time just one demand, 

Every moment moaned for your view 

I am surprise at this experience new. 

Foolish heart does not care about anything 

Only follow you and looking 

Between mind and heart, there is much distinction 

Mind say talk but heart want your attraction. 

When it is look you not 

It started to grumbling and thought 

I am not tried my best or right 

And began to beat in plight.

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Your voice from the heart,
nice structure and with beauty inside.
Love the second stanza.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!

[Lyndy]

Lovely. :) The poem is beautiful! ^^

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[Deepika]

"It is not obeying my command
Every time just one demand"
This is so true! Though the mind knows the truth, the heart is too adamant to accept it.
Good one!

[Saddam]

Thank you dear.......

[Chris]

timeless echoes fill your piece, so many "feel" this way.

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot, Sir.

[Ishita Dixit]

Nice poem!
Keep it up!
:)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear.

[Ana B.]

Beautiful and full of longing.....eh these hearts of ours...
Nice write dear :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear fiend....

[maria ( rose)]

Foolish heart does not care about anything
Only follow you and looking
Between mind and heart, there is much distinction
Mind say talk but heart want your attraction
Just love this stanza beautiful write ♥

[Saddam]

Nice to hear from you dear........... Glad you like it.

[katja]

a lovely write indeed...
... i adore the image of a heart which has a voice
*
thank you for sharing
~yekaterina

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend......

[Jamestown]

The heart's voice, now this was well thought out and executed, I enjoyed reading this and
thanks for sharing.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much friend...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The story told by the heart alone, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend....