A FACEBOOK MESSAGE

As previous days, I was busy on facebook
My time is scheduled
with friends, for a common look.

I explained my days words
Often, lonely before screen
But other side, there are many worlds.

One day, early morning, I opened my notebook
A box spark on front of me
Amazed, I move my cursor and took.

Message start with saying "Hello dear!"
I scrolled it down to know
Who write this, but not that clear.

A unknown message was that, publish
Surprisingly, I read that all
I found that a lovely piece and relish.

A majestic magic spread in my vein
This unknown lady give me unknown feelings
I search her all profile and want to remain.

At my heart wall has stuck a yest
All of sudden, I write the page
And post it holding my chest.

Nothing I do then for only looking her profile
She was so pretty and her post was nice
Something I note and something I save in file.

After a short time a box blinked on screen
Stirringly I opened it very soon
But that was not good which I seen.

Her answer was very short and forlorn
"Sorry! you are a unrecognized person"
I shut down my computer in deep morn.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is sad but no worries there are more pretty fishes in the sea :)

[Saddam]

that's your lines give me a new reason to smile, thank you very much.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome.Glad I could make you smile :)

[Penny]

What a sad little tale. You here, have presented poetry in a different form.. the one which follows our rollercoster of feeligs regarding an event not so dramatic but nominal. Well done.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend...

[Penny]

Anytime buddy

[AYVID N]

Oh! That is sad. Yet it was good while it lasted. :)
A lively read.

[Saddam]

thank you for your kind words dear....

[SAYED THANGAL]

it has a systematic flow, the climax is beautiful
sayed

[Saddam]

A deep hearted thank you sir,,,. Happy new year.

[SAYED THANGAL]

same to you, thanks

[MsJewel]

I've never been a big fan of facebook or any online social media...too much drama for me..

:) Julie

[Saddam]

OK, but it is very excitment too...thanks...

[Rasi Rana]

:) loved It ) Really it happens, today it happened wid me, an ex student of our school sent me a request and asked does I remember her? wen I said no, she became annoyed and after some time said Iwas finding sum1 else :) lol

[Saddam]

thank you, it has happened with me some day ago too. funny n!