A FACEBOOK MESSAGE

As previous days, I was busy on facebook
My time is scheduled
with friends, for a common look.

I explained my days words
Often, lonely before screen
But other side, there are many worlds.

One day, early morning, I opened my notebook
A box spark on front of me
Amazed, I move my cursor and took.

Message start with saying "Hello dear!"
I scrolled it down to know
Who write this, but not that clear.

A unknown message was that, publish
Surprisingly, I read that all
I found that a lovely piece and relish.

A majestic magic spread in my vein
This unknown lady give me unknown feelings
I search her all profile and want to remain.

At my heart wall has stuck a yest
All of sudden, I write the page
And post it holding my chest.

Nothing I do then for only looking her profile
She was so pretty and her post was nice
Something I note and something I save in file.

After a short time a box blinked on screen
Stirringly I opened it very soon
But that was not good which I seen.

Her answer was very short and forlorn
"Sorry! you are a unrecognized person"
I shut down my computer in deep morn.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Wow this was amazing my friend


Bravo I have missed you.



thank you for sharing.


God bless. Benita

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. I am too...... Sorry for fb disconnect. I replied you next day

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome my friend always a pleasure to read your work. that's ok I have been writing I just wrote 2 new poems will have to share with you I posted 2 on one of my poetry groups. God bless. Benita

[Lyndy]

Wow, the ending was strange. haha. :D

It was a nice written work! ;)

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear.....

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Ow again an amazing common daily life story that you have turned into a poem. I really enjoy your way of writing . Awesome !

[Skai Rain]

Wow. You just made one of the most shallow websites out there deep and poetic. This is exactly why I love your work. Keep it up!

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear beloved poet.

[Ana B.]

Beautiful , realistic , raw. Its nice to live in a generic world, but soon enough, reality catches up with us....lovely work my dear.

[Vanesa Markovic]

I gave up on that soul-sucking site a while back, it's all evil, in Facebook land!
Haha!
Another great write up!
-VM

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

True but not all of it is not to me I ignore the bad on there. I connect with family on there that is miles away that I can get a hold of another and I have childhood friends on there some use it for things they shouldn't most to speak with family and close friends they haven't seen since child hood and I don't live in my home town is why I speak to them on facebook. but we do what works for us.

[brezybaby3]

i like the message behind this poem. great job, keep it up

[Khushi]

Something so common.. but you have written it so well that it has become in interesting!

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend, your review is something specialty.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A novel concept and one to be studied further, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

thanks sir....i am happy.

[Shaquana Adams]

I've never seen a facebook poem before. This is a sad story, but nicely written :)

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear....this was amazing for me too that making a poem on facebook.