MY CONFUSING STATE

When the sun is dialing up time 

My heart beat little more than rhyme, 

Of course, I love her with all my heart 

But like offender,one thing tease me hard. 

When I'll tell about this, my desire to her 

What will be her reaction and answer. 

Her joy, her naughtiness and playful nature 

Make me delight and more, and more blither, 

Her irresistible smile overwhelmed me 

Even meager silent anguish badly. 

When I see her in fairy white dress 

I feel delighted but other way distress. 

Every night, I took firm decision 

But, morning...on me, stand a question, 

Evidently, I can not control and bear 

"I love you", she must be hear. 

I am totally insane for my confusing state 

I love myself before her otherwise I hate.

Reviews

[Blue]

"I love myself before her otherwise I hate." You infected me with your confusion, too! Haha. Happy valentine's day!

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend ....and same to you dear...

[Khushi]

Again, romantic, lovely and sweet! What is it with you and white dresses?

[Saddam]

my love, which is no more with me, white dress mein pari ki tarah lagti thi. so for remembering her I write this one. I am glad to like.

[SAYED THANGAL]

the images in the poem is so touching as ''she'' was narrated

[Saddam]

thank you dear sir..

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Confusing indeed, a drama tat grips us all from time to time, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

thanks again sir, your feedback is just real.

[costa siwale]

A sensational writing, confusion is a form of expression. Well done

[Saddam]

Thank you sir, I try my best to express my inner heart, it's my own story.

[Sami Khalil]

"When the sun is dialing up time
My heart beat little more than rhyme,
Of course, I love her with all my heart
But like offender,one thing tease me hard."

I hope your sun will come out from behind those clouds of confusion...A splendid poem...:)..........

[Penny]

Awww.. dat is so sweet. & if dats real story i hope u gt d courage & propose her at d ri8 tym.

[Saddam]

Thanks dear sir....but it is my past story...at which I cry every day.

[Penny]

Now that is awful. But its nothing to cry, I suppose for life always has something in store for us

[Saddam]

Hope so.....thank you dear

[Penny]

Ur welcum.